"Flashback effect looks cool"
"Shot types were good"
"Really good narrative, easily understandble"
"Shot frequency and variety makes it interesting"
"Good use of shots, simple but VERY effective"
"Very effective ending"
"Good skills with the guitar"
"Good setting"
Negative:
"Improve lighting"
"Why does she give him her jacket?"
"More feeling could be included in the jacket, especially facial expressions"
"Guitar in sync"
"Work on syncing couple need a bit more chemistry. Lighting is too bright so lose face at points"
"Guitar sync, fade out at big strum."
"Could be lip synced to the guitar"
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