feedback from rough cut

positive

- nice variety of shots.

- good shots.

- good lighting effects.

- a good variety of shots that fit in the video and song really well.

- romance is beautiful and creative editing on couple together.

- tells a story with good shots and good ending shot.

negative

- bit of the lighting could be toned down. I realize its a flashback but it sometimes looks weird.

- the actor is laughing, shots change to quickly and need to make the storyline clearer.

- guitar isn't on sync and the fades are too bright. 

- not so keen on the bright effects when sitting on riverside against a tree.

- editing is too bright, would look better b&w.

- more camera angles.

- to make it look leng you need to sync the guitar and sing.