feedback on final

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Genre conventions- they met the conventions of the genre- indie rock- by the choice of costumes e.g skinny jeans, hairstyles. the props linked in as well such as the guitar.

Lip syncing could have been improved because at points it was difficult to tell whether or not the artist was meant to be singing or not.

The use of editing techniques were used well. Colour correction was used to create a better mood for the song which worked really well. The past and present was made really clear due to the fade of colour which allowed the audience to keep track of the narrative.

A variety of camera angles and shot types were used to capture the emotions of the artist. The close up and mid shots were used to allow the audience to identify the artist and the long shots were used to capture the location. The zooming of the shots were really effective, however they were slightly jolty at times.

Selling the artist- This was done well through showing his behaviour and personality with the relationship with the other character